Рецензия на «When I m thinking of you» (Евгения Задорожная 2)
Hi, Eugenia! Just came across your piece of poetry in English. Wonder if I may suggest a few minor revisions. Cheers! You: And every night the God I pray. Me: And every night to God I pray. You: But life's on going anyway... Me: But life's ongoing anyway... (ongoing means ‘progressing’) You: There were a cross the road Me: There was a crossroad You: I can't stop to cry, it hurts. (guess, it distorts the meaning, which means you’re busy doing something and no time to stop to cry) Me: I can't stop crying, it hurts. (the connotation implies that you keep crying) Вагиф Гаджиев 13.03.2020 17:48 • Заявить о нарушении
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