Рецензия на «Broken Wings» (Лилия Белая)
Hi there! Sorry to disturb You. I used to read poems in English and i have noticed the following: 1)"Like bird" (may be "a bird"; 2)there are no nouns "waives"; 3)"It's came" ("has come" the third form of the verb?); 4) "get makes" ( "gets making"); 5) "get brakes" ("get breaks"); 6)"Big sadness lay down" ("lays down"). Please, don't complain. Good luck in your Poetry Journey!!! Андрей Боровков 10.12.2018 07:52 • Заявить о нарушении
Hello Andrew, I am very much appreciate your comments! I must work on it. Thank you!
Regards, Lily Лилия Белая 10.12.2018 08:01 Заявить о нарушении
Перейти на страницу произведения |
