причесала перевод.. вот что получилось..

Seconds ticking... as opportunity evening -
to my mind important... brief interval!
Time turns problems... to day complete
it's time to bed, but thoughts as days whirling..

Instead thoughts, I brows usual sites,
in faceless groups ...I simply seeking...
Maybe I'll find megabytes in flickers...
about great thoughts - brief retelling...

Into life wilds - my glance is penetrated,
that's useless! - but for me it's stories...
Between or among - my sharp mind wanders
in fights and squabble of vague theories.

I'm very surprised of that conceit cries,
convince each other - they friendly seeking
If they convince me, then all my doubts
definitely will recognized them as ailment..

In brains - launching casual shadows
of alien complex - I'm full of impressions,
From uncoming ideas - I'm in world of slumbers,
night...seconds ticking... time's running out..

Миледи Ольга Переводы   31.03.2024 22:39   Заявить о нарушении

По мне - так круто.
Следующий этап переводы рифмованные делать. Чтобы в английском тоже стихом читать😁

Раскрытый Андрей   01.04.2024 08:42   Заявить о нарушении