Рецензия на «История о кораблике» (Гладиолус)
How much better it seems now than when it is finally done– the unforgettable first line, the cunning way the stanzas run. The rhymes soft-spoken and suggestive are barely audible at first, an appetite not yet acknowledged like the inkling of a thirst. While gradually the form appears as each line is coaxed aloud– the architecture of a room seen from the middle of a crowd. The music that of common speech but slanted so that each detail sounds unexpected as a sharp inserted in a simple scale. Рифмочка 25.12.2020 19:01 • Заявить о нарушении
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