Рецензия на «Damage» (Лилия Белая)
Hi there! It's me again! It's a pleasure for me to read your poems. Some notices: 1)"My only hopes were be again with you" (is it better to say "to be"?), 2)"feelings give to you" (may be "given"?),3)"nobody will know Deep damage stay" (please, consider "will stay" or "stays", Yeap?).Good luck! Enjoy your composition writings further! Андрей Боровков 10.12.2018 08:10 • Заявить о нарушении
Yes, I am glad to hear from you again...and really glad that you doing this editing for me. Many times - thanks!
With respect, Lily Лилия Белая 10.12.2018 08:37 Заявить о нарушении
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