Рецензия на «Forlornness» (Анастасия Авраменко)
The title is extremely exact. Very strong and deep verse. And despite its melancholic tone, I can't say that the poem itself is melancholic. "It has nothing to be worth than life" - absolutely agree. Well, very good. But... There is a mistake if you don't mind. Not "Don’t you tired" but "Aren't you tired"... Anyway thank you for your deep feeling Best regards... Марина Болгова 15.07.2008 • Заявить о нарушении
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