Рецензия на «Keep silence. No words. No love» (Лана Тарадай)
Dear Lana, you look so much unhappy here, one just wants to help you with all his efforts. It means that your small poem really touches one's heart... Thank you for it. Unfortunately, I don't know how to help you... :( One note: in the last sentence the verb "enjoy" does not need a preposition after it, I think, just "Enjoy your freedom". Sincerely, Dmitry. Дмитрий Поздеев 20.03.2008 • Заявить о нарушении
Above all, thank you very much for this so touching review! I'm so happy to read your kind words! It's a great pleasure for me! Time will help me, I think.... another heartache, another failed romance...) life time is very short, so we must enjoy it inspite of series of misfortunes...
Thank you for the correction! I'm so inattentive! That's my nature! Thank you! Yours sincerely, Lana. Лана Тарадай 20.03.2008 14:55 Заявить о нарушении
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