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Рецензия на «So, you re in love» (Ронни Фоксова)
I must agree with the preceding speaker that this piece of poetry is really something outstanding and its rhythm is the thing that strikes most. Anyway there seems to be a certain number of spelling mistakes which can’t of course spoil the general impression.
They've build a tunnel - built
Of quickly patring adolescence – parting?
a drop of sence? - sense
A couple pence she costed. - Cost – irregular verb
Of skattered shadow-like daydream – scattered
As for your Spanish poem, its simplicity makes it even nicer. :))
So, thanks for the pleasure you gave me with your poems!
Sincerely yours,
Ramiro L-T.
Рамиро Лебедев-Толмач 16.11.2017 16:30 • Заявить о нарушении
I must agree with the preceding speaker that this piece of poetry is really something outstanding and its rhythm is the thing that strikes most. Anyway there seems to be a certain number of spelling mistakes which can’t of course spoil the general impression.
They've build a tunnel - built
Of quickly patring adolescence – parting?
a drop of sence? - sense
A couple pence she costed. - Cost – irregular verb
Of skattered shadow-like daydream – scattered
As for your Spanish poem, its simplicity makes it even nicer. :))
So, thanks for the pleasure you gave me with your poems!
Sincerely yours,
Ramiro L-T.
Рамиро Лебедев-Толмач 16.11.2017 16:30 • Заявить о нарушении
many thanks for your feedback and the notes) I must have been too emotional when typing this poem)
will surely return the visit!
Best,
me
Ронни Фоксова 16.11.2017 22:24 Заявить о нарушении
will surely return the visit!
Best,
me
Ронни Фоксова 16.11.2017 22:24 Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «So, you re in love» (Ронни Фоксова)
Wow! Your rhymes and the rythm of this poem are very good.. And the theme is dramatic as well as our life. You've motivated me to write smth in English. To say you the truth, it's the first time for the last month =)
Вадим Де Макондо 14.09.2013 23:37 • Заявить о нарушении
Wow! Your rhymes and the rythm of this poem are very good.. And the theme is dramatic as well as our life. You've motivated me to write smth in English. To say you the truth, it's the first time for the last month =)
Вадим Де Макондо 14.09.2013 23:37 • Заявить о нарушении
Thanks) Frankly speaking, I haven't been writing anything either, this poem appeared... by chance... during some lecture) the source of inspiration - I'll tell you later, better in a private message (if you have time and are in a good mood to read all these... what's thr English for sopli, kotorye - feelings?))))
Good luck with your poem, I can't wait to read your new masterpiece!) don't let the system get you down!;)
Ронни Фоксова 15.09.2013 00:56 Заявить о нарушении
Good luck with your poem, I can't wait to read your new masterpiece!) don't let the system get you down!;)
Ронни Фоксова 15.09.2013 00:56 Заявить о нарушении
Sopli in English? May by soap? I have no idea =)
Ok, we’ll have a talk about it without any witnesses;)
You didn’t understand right because I had meant this comment in English. To write a poem is an undoable mission for me, I usually write only in Russian or Spanish.
Вадим Де Макондо 15.09.2013 18:20 Заявить о нарушении
Ok, we’ll have a talk about it without any witnesses;)
You didn’t understand right because I had meant this comment in English. To write a poem is an undoable mission for me, I usually write only in Russian or Spanish.
Вадим Де Макондо 15.09.2013 18:20 Заявить о нарушении
sometimes it happens that we don't choose the languare we write in. Some words, lines just apeear as if from the air, and we are to develop them:3
Ронни Фоксова 17.09.2013 18:31 Заявить о нарушении
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