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Upon the scales of tinny fishes
new lips summoned, though yet mute.
But could you
to the finish
a nocturne on a drainpipe flute?
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On the scales of a tin fish
I read the summons of new lips.
And you
could you perform
a nocturne on a drainpipe flute?
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Upon the fish scales’ tinsel pattern
I’ve read unknown lips’ salute
And you,
could you have played
a nocturne
On a waterspout for a flute?
Clittary Hilton 03.02.2005 00:52 Заявить о нарушении
It is nice to hear from you. Why is flute?, I had in mind more like a baby grand for my night fingers to play...
Cheers
А Н Е Л 03.02.2005 14:22 Заявить о нарушении
Cheers!
Clittary Hilton 03.02.2005 18:40 Заявить о нарушении
Sorry, it was too late in a day and I have not recognised the famous line.
O tiny fishes,
that like sardines
are packed in tins…
They are delicious!
Now play nocturne
on drainpipe urn
instead of flute -
receive salute…
Cheers
:0)))
Lena
А Н Е Л 03.02.2005 23:51 Заявить о нарушении
в ваших стихах временами проскальзывают интонации Блейка. глубинный респект ;)
Брат Иоклий 10.05.2004 02:49 Заявить о нарушении
Can you explain what lines remind you of the Master?
Sorry, but this computer is not set up with Russian keyboard.
Regards
ANEL
А Н Е Л 10.05.2004 09:14 Заявить о нарушении
Брат Иоклий 10.05.2004 20:30 Заявить о нарушении
Regards
А Н Е Л 11.05.2004 12:28 Заявить о нарушении