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Рецензия на «Games» (А Н Е Л)
Let's play for action, not results,
Enjoying games for tough adults.
Great poem, deep and thoughtful. I'll be happy to see your name on the list of my readers. I will be a frequent guest on your page.
Warmest regards,
Marina N.
Марина Львовна Новикова 14.11.2004 20:24 • Заявить о нарушении
Let's play for action, not results,
Enjoying games for tough adults.
Great poem, deep and thoughtful. I'll be happy to see your name on the list of my readers. I will be a frequent guest on your page.
Warmest regards,
Marina N.
Марина Львовна Новикова 14.11.2004 20:24 • Заявить о нарушении
Dear Marina,
It is probably
Let's play for action, not results,
Enjoying games for young adults.
As the game that we play when we try to be part of the club as young adults – degree, family, jobs, money etc gets reconsidered usually by the time we realise that we are mortals after all. The realisation that we all fellow travellers make a big difference in how we continue with the game.
Thank you for your kind remarks and I will be frequent visitor to your page
Cheers
А Н Е Л 15.11.2004 09:21 Заявить о нарушении
It is probably
Let's play for action, not results,
Enjoying games for young adults.
As the game that we play when we try to be part of the club as young adults – degree, family, jobs, money etc gets reconsidered usually by the time we realise that we are mortals after all. The realisation that we all fellow travellers make a big difference in how we continue with the game.
Thank you for your kind remarks and I will be frequent visitor to your page
Cheers
А Н Е Л 15.11.2004 09:21 Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «Games» (А Н Е Л)
So life is a game
And we all are losers?
Of course, you will kill
The one who succeed
Just to prove it? ;-)
The biggest secret of life
Is that we ARE Gods of our lifes
We set our own rules,
And yours are clear here
Just funny you hate them, halas! ;)
http://www.proza.ru/2003/05/13-15
That's the secret, but it'll be safe in your keeping, since you believe not a bit in its truth ;)
Вита Алая 29.10.2004 00:52 • Заявить о нарушении
So life is a game
And we all are losers?
Of course, you will kill
The one who succeed
Just to prove it? ;-)
The biggest secret of life
Is that we ARE Gods of our lifes
We set our own rules,
And yours are clear here
Just funny you hate them, halas! ;)
http://www.proza.ru/2003/05/13-15
That's the secret, but it'll be safe in your keeping, since you believe not a bit in its truth ;)
Вита Алая 29.10.2004 00:52 • Заявить о нарушении
Dear Vita,
The life is all we have and it is as beautiful as we make it. However we are just mortals and from this point of view we have only limited time for everything.
We are not Gods in our lives. We cannot plan or control much. You know I will not kill anyone, but all people are mortals, as one doctor use to say - the dearth rate in humans is 100%. And all of us – famous and humble will be dust at the end, as well as everything we will do. This is why
We only have a moment then
I think that your view is not far from mine, just a difference in time travelled
Best regards
А Н Е Л 15.11.2004 09:31 Заявить о нарушении
The life is all we have and it is as beautiful as we make it. However we are just mortals and from this point of view we have only limited time for everything.
We are not Gods in our lives. We cannot plan or control much. You know I will not kill anyone, but all people are mortals, as one doctor use to say - the dearth rate in humans is 100%. And all of us – famous and humble will be dust at the end, as well as everything we will do. This is why
We only have a moment then
I think that your view is not far from mine, just a difference in time travelled
Best regards
А Н Е Л 15.11.2004 09:31 Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «Games» (А Н Е Л)
amazing!!
after i finished i noticed that i held my breath throughout the whole poem. you are unbelievable. i've tried writing in english, but i can't write like that. here's a link to my best try: http://www.stihi.ru/2004/03/18-82
Хотылёва 03.05.2004 12:23 • Заявить о нарушении
amazing!!
after i finished i noticed that i held my breath throughout the whole poem. you are unbelievable. i've tried writing in english, but i can't write like that. here's a link to my best try: http://www.stihi.ru/2004/03/18-82
Хотылёва 03.05.2004 12:23 • Заявить о нарушении
Thank You. Наташа,
The combination of two cultures and two languages play some strange tricks. I left my comments on your site.
It look like we are in two different countries - Canada & Australia. Live behind a looking glass, like Alica
Cheers
Yours ANEL
А Н Е Л 04.05.2004 16:37 Заявить о нарушении
The combination of two cultures and two languages play some strange tricks. I left my comments on your site.
It look like we are in two different countries - Canada & Australia. Live behind a looking glass, like Alica
Cheers
Yours ANEL
А Н Е Л 04.05.2004 16:37 Заявить о нарушении