Clubbing

Hey you, the young crowd, how much is
Clubbing with a woman growing old -
Before the dullness of a knife touches
Every portrait on her peeling wall;
Before she speaks to the moon quietly
As her sunset turns monotone;
Before snow comes, wrongly or rightly,
To claim what is no longer her own;
Before every key in every keyhole
Slowly turns to lock every door;
Before the dust on the worn-out sole
Turns into solid cement; before
The thoughts turn back and the dear old faces
All wane from being improperly kept
In storage, and times are mistaken for places,
And shots are called by someone inept;   
Before they begin the merry countdown
Of new years dressed in silver and black;
Before the discolored wedding gown
Finds its final rest on a rack;
Before it becomes unimportant somehow
That so many secrets can finally unfold...
Come club with her, the yet-young crowd.
Come club with a woman growing old.

 









   


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We all fear something: the coward fears death; the hero – dishonor; the clueless few who, not sure what "clubbing" means sought help from the dictionary, probably fear encountering the author with a few "yet-young" friends by her side. :-) A beautiful woman may fear the inevitable departure of youth more than most. Yet the lyrical heroine is afraid, but not cowered. I imagine her facing the still-appealing club scene of some dusty midwestern city, whispering through clenched teeth the litany from "Dune":

"I must not fear.
Fear is the mind-killer..."

She lays her fears bare before us so we might find it easier to face ours. At least this reviewer feels less... afraid after reading the poem. Thank you!

Велиандр   04.09.2013 04:14     Заявить о нарушении
Thank you, for feeling this poem the way you did. I am moved.

Евгения Саркисьянц   04.09.2013 06:03   Заявить о нарушении