I came across her photo in a frame...

Николай Порада
I came across her photo in a frame,
And glanced at dark-grey colour...
Is there a person I should blame? 
Myself, who kept it out of fire...

So many times I tried to burn it down,   
Pretend to be too hard and dour,         
But there are things, that can't be done
Some things, I never will assure...      

New day will come, and I will damn myself
For actions, thoughts and speeches,       
I said to you time and again             
And will anew... I'm such a creature...

                28.01.2010


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Don't be too hard,
but - be on guard!

A good verse, really! It's a kind of inner monologue, very open and frank. To my taste, it would be better in the last line: "I'm such a creature"...

Best regards,

Валерий Шувалов   28.01.2010 23:25   •   Заявить о нарушении
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Thanks, you're right -- it really sounds better that way.

Your colleague,
Nick.

P.S. Forgive me for the delay of my answer.

Николай Порада   03.02.2010 17:57   Заявить о нарушении
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