Рецензия на «Подбалконная серенада» (профиль удален)
Sire, The preposition with the balcony in the third stanza gives the reader the impression of a decidedly unfortunate choice, as the verb is suggestive more of an action of penetrating into something rather than falling onto something. By addressing this minor issue you would ensure that your impervious glory continues to proliferate. Kind regards, Чёрный Георг Постскриптум 12.05.2013 07:25 • Заявить о нарушении
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