You are so charming, full of grace.
Your majesty is out of reach.
Your feelings seem to be a lace,
The love to you has to be preached.
As dear wife and as a bride,
As mother with a tender heart
(and it is not to be denied)
You’re for me like piece of art.
To love you is the deepest bliss,
The best award is your love.
I’m longing only for your kiss,
Don’t think you, I’m not good enough?
And this creation of the Lord
Was born to love, to be admired,
To help the people in the world
To find themselves and be inspired.
To a woman
© Copyright: Дмитрий Лукашенко, 2019
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Понравилось! Симпатичное ироническое такое стихотворение.
Только ритм бы чуток подправить во второй строке предпоследней строфы.
Возможен такой вариант:
The best award is in your love.
С уважением,
Марина Проняева 31.07.2021 22:55 • Заявить о нарушении
Только ритм бы чуток подправить во второй строке предпоследней строфы.
Возможен такой вариант:
The best award is in your love.
С уважением,
Марина Проняева 31.07.2021 22:55 • Заявить о нарушении