So let us finally and irreversibly be done...
I’ll stop neglecting your pretension if you wish-
You want me, but not with you. That is fine.
For you my awkward attitude, damn love’s too sugarish...
Enough of sentiments inevitably dull...
Elastic time is making thoughts transparent.
Keep counting promises from thousand to null.
Indifferent look will be for you last errand.
You owe me it for it will kill the hope
And hope is something that is not worth living.
I’m slowly ramping from the same old slope-
Naively blind and still am not believing.
Erroneous daring to tame your free will
Has caused me nothing, but deterioration.
I hopelessly have always tried to heal
All the incisions scarred by separation.
I’ll mince the patience letting go the strain...
Your scent will seldom catch me reminiscing.
Don’t notice deep inside the livid stain-
The memory of you and me. Still missing...
Still missing...
© Copyright: Соня Бородянская, 2008
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'Still missing', and guess 'still wilfully missing'
That verse of yours is so compassionately powerful to all those who've ever had been falling down the same void of abruptly cut-off relationships.
So, if I say I am moved, I really mean it. Always did I pay tribute to those who write in other languages - be it English or any other.
So pursue the same waypoint, and let me contemplate some more images aroused by vivid, and imaginative verses of yours.
Suberb!
Алекс Лейтон 03.06.2008 14:15 • Заявить о нарушении
That verse of yours is so compassionately powerful to all those who've ever had been falling down the same void of abruptly cut-off relationships.
So, if I say I am moved, I really mean it. Always did I pay tribute to those who write in other languages - be it English or any other.
So pursue the same waypoint, and let me contemplate some more images aroused by vivid, and imaginative verses of yours.
Suberb!
Алекс Лейтон 03.06.2008 14:15 • Заявить о нарушении
You made me blush)) Thatis absolutely so)...But as you have noticed all the emotions which inspired me were not very pleasant...so, even in order to write smth even better- I wouldn't want to feel it all again...But thank you anyway^)))
Соня Бородянская 03.06.2008 21:47 Заявить о нарушении
Соня Бородянская 03.06.2008 21:47 Заявить о нарушении
Oh right.
Then let me specify - I wish whatever you write next would be inspired only by your reflections, and not reminiscences =)
Алекс Лейтон 03.06.2008 22:49 Заявить о нарушении
Then let me specify - I wish whatever you write next would be inspired only by your reflections, and not reminiscences =)
Алекс Лейтон 03.06.2008 22:49 Заявить о нарушении
Tha's exactly what I'm trying to achieve- the ability to write from my perceptive, not emotional, experience)
Соня Бородянская 04.06.2008 00:02 Заявить о нарушении
Соня Бородянская 04.06.2008 00:02 Заявить о нарушении
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