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Чеховская Анна Анатольевна 17.09.2015 08:35 Заявить о нарушении
I wrote my verse 'Sometimes' before I read yours.
I think this word can surprise people
I liked it
Good luck!
Олег Артынов 18.07.2011 14:58 Заявить о нарушении
Luv which starts as innocent affection
Usually finds a great reflection
In your heart, in your soul,
In your mind. Only once
Sometimes you have a chance.
Don't miss it, a call,
A call, your inner,
Should well be treated. A Winner
You'll become.
And that is awesome! :)
(don't treat it as a poem, just my thoughts :)
4ever yours Глеб
Глеб Васильев 05.08.2006 23:37 Заявить о нарушении
Love lies only within the soul and blooms without regard to season. Your poem is well written and expressed. your rhymes are very good, not trite/contrived. It was a pleasure to read. Sue
Мэтти Дубоис 21.05.2006 07:44 Заявить о нарушении
Are we looking for a perfect soulmate or for a person to give our love to? But love really starts from small things - a smile, a poem... and makes us want to be a better person.
Tho only future knows what comes on our way...
Impressive and dear to me=)
Thank you, K.
Демонлилианн 12.10.2005 04:26 Заявить о нарушении
Imagery is excellent. Yet in the second line of the first stanza must be "me" instead of "I." Maybe:
The stars at night float just to spell your name,
And birds of spring are singing sweet lie.
I know times change, but we can be the same.
You were and will be perfect to my eye…
Леон Татис 05.09.2005 05:29 Заявить о нарушении
Thank you for reading my poem.
Шуйский 15.09.2005 01:40 Заявить о нарушении
Sometimes we love and don't ask for anything in return
Sometimes we hate and hurt others.. by deeds or words
And sometimes we just live our lives=)
Beautiful...
Демонлилианн 07.07.2005 01:30 Заявить о нарушении
You never lie - indeed
beautiful lines=)
Демонлилианн 06.07.2005 01:32 Заявить о нарушении