Рецензия на «Wanted» (Алена Летняя)
How about such a variant in the last line - Don't let love be wasted? It's only a suggestion. In my opinion the poem is lovely. With best wishes, Ирина Борунова-Кукушкина 11.01.2019 10:11 • Заявить о нарушении
Thanks, Irina, I will think about your suggestion, but most likely leave it the way it’s originally written (no offense!)
Алена Летняя 19.01.2019 08:20 Заявить о нарушении
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