Рецензия на «Двое» (Егоров Юрий)

Юра!привет...вот так лег перевод этого
замечательного стихо...с теплом и улыбками...:)))
Оля.
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Couple of people
It did not come to someone in a head
That it's possible to name her as charming.
She knew it and didn't love inattentively
Often to regret and to dream of happiness.

She could so easily and so quietly
To be looked in a smile of cold mirrors,
It's neither exciting, nor is sick for her -
Well... It's not an ideal.What would she do?

From work to home, where's cosy and is silent,
Only music in the guests, and rustle of pages,
Night lamp for all night because she's afraid,
Also in dreams confused a timid prince.

Dinners on Saturday under the mum sighes,
Well... Just gotta a lot of babies all friends
And she'd like to read only books, so silly,
And all there isn't as how like people at her

It's familiar, will be spoiled also all evenings...
But not there reasons to change anything
In present, in future...to reach own home by pools ,
Maybe, where isn't anyone as so familer like men.

She'd like the nice summers, and smell of the south -
In two couples of weeks as you win or rent paradise ,
There's something and somebody about each other...
Will gonna to nothing...The seagull, the surf and sunset...

… But he smiled and looked so silly and shy
Laid on a sofa and dreamed again and again
About his Lady … but now, for reasons,
Her name was unknown for him...So pitty...

His favourite sonnet is not open...sorry..
He'd not ate his supper, his Mother's disturbed,
He's smoked with Father by sixth cigarette -
If you know, is he gonna to sleep?What he's wanna?

He's only thirty. He's handsome, goodlooking...
A short hairstyle …Hot coffee and cream pie...
He's embarased under her sight as the boy …
Well, what's so funny? He already was killed!

The deepest the sky …The deepest the sea …
The deepest the lakes in her caress eyes!
The universe happiness … but, seems, misfortune …
The arrows have stiffened by watch...Silly...down...

And if she's in love and belongs to another?
Whether well she will store love in the heart?
If there will be that she's the angel from heaven?..
And how in further he'd be and to live ?

Nothing at all... It's urgent to do...To decide...
And tomorrow in cafe he'd approached and asked:
-Well... Is it possible if I'll dream you this night?..
If I'd be fall in love with you... through all my life?..

Ольга Х   28.01.2008     Заявить о нарушении

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