Рецензия на «Lullaby» (профиль удален)
Sir, you asked for it. When THE sun goes down... SleepS everyone (I am not sure, but whether black whether white just doesn't sound right). Worthy and shabby are not direct antonyms. One can be worthy AND shabby. One can not be both evil and kind, still they are not antonyms either. You'll see what IN THE evening TO you only seems. Even written like that it's not much of a sentence. Seems means "appears to be what it isn't", as in "the door seemed locked, but it wasn't". Are you going to see in your sleep everything that seems to you in the evening? When it is night and your eyes say it is - what, for goodness sake, is this supposed to mean? Семинарист 12.02.2004 • Заявить о нарушении
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