Рецензии на произведение «Сожжение - ранний романс»
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Self-burning - early romance...
I have to burn my rhymes... under influence of bold ruthless impulse...
and tongues of flame are licking ... the reflection of exciting feelings...
Everything has burning down... has failed in sensitive heart to hide...
to hate there's one instant... and to forgive forever in the same time...
Goodbye... my sincerely heart lines.... and that with you were burning...
let flame will place all dots of life... that by my fate there were given...
But hope and love believe in alive... unsmoulder... they'll be revived ...
having forgotten this ashes palm ... will be begun from a clean sheet...
с нежностью.
Оля.
Ольга Х 10.11.2010 16:24 Заявить о нарушении
С сердечной признательностью и теплом души,
твоя Анетт
Анетта Руж 11.11.2010 01:29 Заявить о нарушении