стихи внезапны так же, как любовь - rus, english

Стихи внезапны так же,
как любовь:
приходят внутрь
беззвучно и незримо,
и вот уже без них
невыносимо,
и вот они уже
впитались в кровь.

И каждый раз ты пишешь,
как в последний,
и говоришь себе:
ни строчки больше вновь!

Но мысль упрямая
опять сольётся с рифмой,
как новая
внезапная любовь.
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Поупражнялась с переводом на английский,
сделала 2 варианта:

1)

My poetry…
It comes inside
as suddenly as love –
invisibly in silence…
But then I feel,
it soaks into my blood,
and after -
all my life is joined
with it in alliance.

And then I swear to myself:      
there won't be any line!

- until new stubborn thought
with rhyme
will fuse together -
- as strong and suddenly
as it love does,
as strong and suddenly
as love can tether!
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2)
My poetry  appears
as sudden as love does:
it comes inside
so soundless and unseen,
but soon my life
without it grows too mean,
because it soaked
so deep into my blood.

And every time I write
like it's my last,
and tell myself:
not one line more again!

But stubborn thought
with rhyme
will fuse
inside my mind,
like does it
new and sudden love,
like does it
unexpected rain!