as inspired by Tati
http://stihi.ru/2025/05/24/7811
FREEEEEZE
May I stay in Today?
May I stay in Tonight?
Time is ticking away
Darkness changing to light
Easy question to ask
Easy answer to give
Hide your love, wear a mask
If you love, then you live
If you live, time moves on
No one stops it for you
What you love will be gone
What you trust won't be true
Ask the same question, please
In a different way:
Can I make the Time freeeeeeze?
Can I lock in Today?
Freeze
© Copyright: Слава Тополев, 2026
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I got it🙃 Perfect👏👏👏
I'm not that good at English as you, BUT... I've got it done my way)
Don't be a very strict judge);)
http://stihi.ru/2026/07/23/6177
And I absolutely LOVE the photo - wanna visit them all..😣
And the fridge is the real copy of mine - how could you know that? 👀
FLY
P. S.
What's the problem with the right spelling of "freeeeze" and "Time" side by side? 🤔
Тати Кёниг 23.07.2026 18:58 • Заявить о нарушении
I'm not that good at English as you, BUT... I've got it done my way)
Don't be a very strict judge);)
http://stihi.ru/2026/07/23/6177
And I absolutely LOVE the photo - wanna visit them all..😣
And the fridge is the real copy of mine - how could you know that? 👀
FLY
P. S.
What's the problem with the right spelling of "freeeeze" and "Time" side by side? 🤔
Тати Кёниг 23.07.2026 18:58 • Заявить о нарушении