I Do

      And then she asks me
      Do I look alright?
      And I say, yes
      You are wonderful tonight

            Eric Clapton, 'Wonderful Tonight'


I DO

She recites her poem
She creates it live
Memory to the limit
You can feel her drive
And the world keeps listening
And her words get through

Do you feel the goosebumps?
Yes, I do, I do ...

Her two little dachshunds
Bustle without fear
Stir applause in rustling
Leaves of yesteryear
And she strokes them dearly
Asking what's the buzz

Does your heart beat faster?
Yes, it does, it does ...

And she shares her feelings
As she speaks out loud
And her soul is sailing
On a friendly cloud
And here comes the question:
Can it all be true?

Do you really love her?
Yes, I do, I do ...


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No words, so far.. Just goosebumps, goosebumps and goosebumps... I'd love to create "my reply".. But in a while, may be.. No thoughts at the moment, only " I do, I do.. I do.. "
It,s great!!!

Тати Кёниг   09.04.2026 01:24     Заявить о нарушении
Thank you for every little thing!

Just looked at my notes, and it took me ten days to get to the final version. It is actually kind of a song, a cross between Eric Clapton and ABBA, 'I Do I Do I Do I Do I Do', a cute song of 1975 with a splendid sax solo.

No hurry! All trains have left ...

Слава Тополев   09.04.2026 01:40   Заявить о нарушении
No hurry at all..) The ships have also sailed away .. The reply may never come.. The really deep thing is hard to reply with something of the same depth.. The other thing isn't worthwhile..

Тати Кёниг   09.04.2026 01:52   Заявить о нарушении
But my dreams must be magically pleasant this night.. And I'm ready to catch them..) Good dreams for you too) SYS)

Тати Кёниг   09.04.2026 02:00   Заявить о нарушении