853. Great mountain wall Vintersorg Fjallets mur

перевод песни "Fjallets maktiga mur" группы "Vintersorg" (Швеция)*

*примечание: поскольку данный перевод во всем блоке был самым сложным, то я решил к нему также подкрепить мало-мальски сформированную схему, тогда как сами исполнители особо над ней не заморачивались. Русская же версия обладала схемой, практически идентичной этой. Две точки ".." здесь означают просто пропуск

Goodbye, my dear forest, that's standing on the border; _/_/_/_ _/_/_/_
Cause here's the mountain ridge that guides breeze back here. _/_/_/_/_/_
There rolled gravel is lying under the rocks to hold them _/_/_/_ _/_/_/_
Since ancient times, since desert stones, with blocks of ice they traveled. _/_/_/_/_/_/_/_

There waterfalls have jaws that below the fortress rise _/_/_/_ _/_/_/
And spit into the river thousands drops. _/_/_/_/_/
And at a high plateau where lynxes hissed shyly, _/_/_/_/_/_/_
There lies a trace of fossil that is washed with the mountain's blood. _/_/_/_/_/_/_/

*In darkness there stands the great mountain wall, _/_ _/.._/_ _/
Where storms are breaking and singing in awe. _/.. _/_ _/_ _/
The glacial sculptures are stretching around _/_ _/_ _/_ _/
Everywhere, shaped by merciless hours. ../_ _/.._/_ _/

**In darkness there stands the great mountain wall, _/_ _/.._/_ _/
Like an army of soldiers, titanic and tall. _/_ _/_ _/_ _/
They shadow the valleys with pointed outlines _/_ _/_ _/_ _/
Like giants who guide every traveler behind. _/_ _/_ _/_ _/

Greetings! The snow mark that shows us the depths, ../_ _/_ _/_ _/
Eternal snow is like a polar dream. _/_/_/_/_/
The full moon spreads its light over the thousand-meter ranges, _/_/_/_/_/_/_/
And shadows run predatorily in a boundless stream._/_/_/_/_/_/_/

These rock plateaus vibrate and grind by this power _/_/_/.. _/_/_/_
Abrading with ice rivers to the stones. _/_/_/_/_/
Here heather covers rocks and weaves it higher, _/_/_/_/_/_
I get the peace to think and live until the end of bones./*/** _/_/_/_/_/_/_/

июль 2025

Русская версия:
http://stihi.ru/2025/07/24/7303
Клип с субтитрами:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VPgqO1oCz1Q