осень

Осень... 
И  небо 
уныло -
печально.
Гнутся 
деревья, 
встречаясь 
с  ветрами.
Зябко, 
промозгло, 
земля 
к  замиранью
Соков 
готова...
и ... даже ...
согласна...
Нынче 
наряды 
мрачнее 
и  строже.
Буйство 
зеленого 
кануло 
к  лету.

Серое 
небо,
пыль 
под  ногами...
Дождь 
моросящий...
голые 
ветки...

перевод:

Autumn

Autumn…
And the sky
is dull —
sad.
Trees bend,
meeting
the winds.
It’s chilly,
damp,
the earth
is ready
for the freezing
of its juices…
and… even…
agrees…
Now
the outfits
are darker
and stricter.
The riot
of green
has sunk
with summer.

Grey
sky,
dust
underfoot…
Drizzling
rain…
bare
branches…


перевод под EDM:

[Verse 1]
Autumn…
And the sky
is dull —
sad.
Trees bend,
meeting
the winds.
It’s chilly,
damp,
the earth
is ready
for the freezing
of its juices…
and… even…
agrees…

[Pre-Chorus]
It’s chilly and damp; the earth
Is ready, even willing,
To pause the flow of its juices,
Into winter’s stillness drifting.

[Chorus]
Now the colours are darker, more stern,
The riot of green has fled with summer’s turn.
A grey sky above, dust beneath the feet,
Drizzling rain, branches bare and bleak.

[Verse 2]
Now
the outfits
are darker
and stricter.
The riot
of green
has sunk
with summer.

Grey
sky,
dust
underfoot…
Drizzling
rain…
bare
branches…

[Pre-Chorus]
It’s chilly and damp; the earth
Is ready, even willing,
To pause the flow of its juices,
Into winter’s stillness drifting.

[Chorus]
Now the colours are darker, more stern,
The riot of green has fled with summer’s turn.
A grey sky above, dust beneath the feet,
Drizzling rain, branches bare and bleak.

варианты припевов:

Вариант 1 (более кинематографичный, с плавными переходами)
[Pre-Chorus]
The air is cold, the ground is still,
It’s ready now, it’s yielding to the chill.
The flow inside is fading slow,
Drifting into winter’s quiet glow.

[Chorus]
The colours turn to shades of grey,
The green has gone, it slipped away.
Grey sky above, dust beneath my feet,
Rain is falling, cold and bittersweet.
Bare branches stretch into the night,
This autumn holds us tight.

Вариант 2 (более драйвовый, с короткими фразами под бит)
[Pre-Chorus]
Cold and damp, the earth gives in,
Letting go, letting winter win.
The sap is fading, fading out,
Drifting down, without a doubt.

[Chorus]
Darker shades, the colours fade,
Green is gone, it can’t be saved.
Grey sky, dust, the rain won’t stop,
Bare and cold, the world is locked.
Branches reach into the dark,
Autumn leaves its mark.

Вариант 3 (с упором на поэтичность и образность, но по-прежнему певуче)
[Pre-Chorus]
A chill is here, the soil is calm,
Willing now to hush its call.
The inner flow is growing faint,
Drifting toward the frozen paint.

[Chorus]
The hues are darker, cold and stern,
Summer’s green has disappeared.
A grey sky hangs above the ground,
Drizzling rain, no sound, no sound.
Bare branches stand against the gloom,
We’re caught inside this autumn’s room.