Was there no?
(Последнее стихотворение Лены, опубликованное на Стихире...)
( http://stihi.ru/2023/03/23/4553 )
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[Style: Psychedelic Dark Folk / Cinematic Art Song, somber and surreal tone]
[Tempo: 66 BPM, slow and lingering like melting ice]
[Key: B minor, bleak and expressive]
[Instruments: Fingerpicked acoustic guitar (dark resonance), soft bowed double bass, brushed snare and toms, analog synth drones (low frequency), reversed reverb guitar tails, distant bells]
[Production: Warm tape saturation, long plate reverb on vocals and guitars, subtle vinyl crackle and tape hiss]
[Vocal Style: Female, low register, breathy and layered, vibrato-heavy, emotional phrasing, spoken-sung style with melancholic pauses]
[INTRO – 8 bars]
[Instructions: Guitar fingerpicking in B minor, drones swell, distant bells ring, ambient noise swirls in]
[Chords: Bm – Em – Bm – F#m]
[Guitar (acoustic; steel
[Bass (bowed; low register):[(4;2)---(4;0)---(4;2)---(3;4)]]
[VERSE 1 – 12 bars]
[Instructions: Whispered-sung vocals; guitar steady, bass sparse, brushes on toms like footsteps]
[Chords: Bm – Bm – Em – F#m – Bm – G – Em – F#m – Bm – Em – Bm – Bm]
Было ли, нет ли – больше не повторится...
Снег по дороге сыпал себе навстречу,
Лунной дорожки петли, набранные на спицы,
Медленный свет роняли на зимний вечер.
Через мгновенье снег превращался в ливень,
Обувь была тяжёлой, одежда – влажной,
Где-то вдали двоились глаза павлиньи
У светофоров, подмигивающих вальяжно.
[INSTRUMENTAL BREAK – 6 bars]
[Instructions: Ambient drone rises, reversed guitar harmonics, sparse bells]
[Chords: Em – Bm – G – F#m – Bm – Bm]
[Guitar: harmonic strikes on high strings]
[Synth: slow LFO modulated pad in Bm]
[VERSE 2 – 10 bars]
[Instructions: Vocals come closer; minimalistic accompaniment, heartbeat-like bass]
[Chords: Em – Bm – F#m – G – Bm – Em – G – F#m – Em – Bm]
Было ли это – дерево ветка к ветке,
Утро, в саду звенящее – птица к птице?
Тело уставшее... Ставшее слишком редким
Желание хоть куда-нибудь возвратиться.
Были ли вечны осени или вёсны,
Сырость и грязь, хроническая простуда?
[BRIDGE – 4 bars]
[Instructions: Guitar in tremolo picking, bass drones, synths reverse/fade]
[Chords: F#m – Bm – G – Em]
[VERSE 3 – 8 bars]
[Instructions: Vocals rise slightly in intensity, still slow, spoken-sung]
[Chords: Bm – G – F#m – Bm – Em – F#m – Em – Bm]
В уличных мутных речках – воды по вёсла,
Ровно, чтоб взять и на хрен грести отсюда.
Было ли лето? Полночь – одна из многих.
Лунной дорожки петли соскальзывали со спицы...
[CHORUS / REFRAIN – 6 bars]
[Instructions: Layers of vocals in whisper and half-sung doubling, tension builds gently]
[Chords: G – Em – F#m – Bm – Em – Bm]
Света клубки, упавшие мне под ноги
Начинали подпрыгивать и катиться...
[OUTRO – 8 bars]
[Instructions: Instruments slowly fade, guitar ends on harmonics, synth swells and tape hiss closes piece]
[Chords: Bm – F#m – Em – Bm]
[Bells: faint shimmer, fade]
[Total Length: ~4 min 40 sec]
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