Реки II

(Part1)
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[Style: blues-rock fusion, with jazz phrasing, expressive solos, ambient breakdowns]
[Tempo: 88 BPM]
[Time Signature: 4/4 shuffle]
[Key: A minor]

[Vocal Style: male baritone, warm phrasing, blues inflection, soft vibrato, medium dynamics]

[Instruments:
[Drums: live kit, midtempo shuffle with ghost notes and rimshots in verse, snare accent on 2/4 in chorus, ride cymbal in bridge]
[Bass: vintage tube tone, syncopated walking lines with chromatic approach notes, supports root movement of Chord progression A]
[Guitar_1: lead electric, blues phrasing with expressive bends, wah pedal in solos, melodic interplay with Vocal 1, mirrors melody during Verse 1 and 3]
[Guitar_2: rhythm electric, clean Fender tone with mild overdrive, plays comping riffs based on chord stabs and syncopation, doubles chords with Rhodes]
[Rhodes: electric piano, fills upper mids, pads chords in chorus, arpeggiates in bridge, sparsely mirrors vocal melody in Verse 2]
[Synth: soft pad layer, ambient presence only in outro for spatial width] ]

[Chord progression:
[A: (Am|Dm7|G|Cmaj7|Fmaj7|Em|Dm7|E7)]
[B: (Cmaj7|G|Dm7|Fmaj7|Am|Em|Dm7|E7)]
[C: (Dm9|G13|Cmaj7|Fmaj7|Am|Em|D7|E7)] ]
[Post-production:
[Mild tape saturation on master bus, spring reverb on Guitar 1, stereo widening on Rhodes, vocal double-tracking with 30ms offset on choruses]
[EQ ducking triggered by vocals on Rhodes and Guitar 2 to clear midrange during verses] ]

[Mood/Emotion:
[Theme: impermanence, memory, rebirth through collective experience]
[Vibe: intimate but cosmic; lyrical realism meets spiritual overtones; soft melancholy with warm undertones of hope] ]

[Lyrics:]

[Intro instrumental (Chord progression A)]
[Guitar_2]:[groove on progression A]:[Tempo]
[Bass]:[groove on progression A]:[Tempo]
[Drums]:[light shuffle]:[Tempo]
[Rhodes]:[held voicings, fades in on bar 3]:[Tempo]

[Verse 1:]
[Guitar_1]:[melodic fragments after vocal lines, mirrors melody]:[Tempo]
[Rhodes]:[sparse harmonization of final chords]:[Tempo]
[Bass]:[supports root movement of Chord progression A]:[Tempo]
[Drums]:[midtempo shuffle, ghost notes, rimshots]:[Tempo]

[Am] Новый день пришёл,
[Dm7] света не принёс —
[G] Вновь брожу по городу,
[Cmaj7] как бездомный пёс.
[Fmaj7] Где присев в тени,
[Em] где испив водицы —
[Dm7] Всё лечу сквозь время
[E7] незаметной птицею.
[Am] Долгожданна ночь,
[G] но так незаметно коротка,
[Dm7] Спят все эмоции,
[E7] и от того она нежна и тиха.
[Am] Мысли упорядоченные
[G] в ярких снах витают,
[Dm7] Нас никто не заметил,
[E7] и к утру отряд растаял…

[Chorus:]
[Drums]:[accent on 2/4 backbeat]:[Tempo]
[Rhodes]:[sustained full chords]:[Tempo]
[Guitar_2]:[rhythmic comping, chord stabs]:[Tempo]
[Bass]:[syncopated walking line, chromatic approaches]:[Tempo]

[Cmaj7] Близкие и незнакомые —
[G] мы сёстры и братья,
[Dm7] Мы — вне времени,
[Fmaj7] веры, возраста и заклятий.
[Am] Искра по искре
[Em] приносит рокот урагана пламени,
[Dm7] Жизнь от жизни
[E7] черпает череду эманаций сознания…

[Bridge instrumental (progression C)]
[Guitar_1]:[solo, expressive blues phrasing]:[Tempo]
[Rhodes]:[arpeggiated upper voicings]:[Tempo]
[Bass]:[free walking line]:[Tempo]
[Drums]:[ride cymbal groove]:[Tempo]
[(Dm9|G13|Cmaj7|Fmaj7|Am|Em|D7|E7)]

[Verse 2:]
[Guitar_1]:[more active, melodic insertions]:[Tempo]
[Rhodes]:[echoes vocal rhythm]:[Tempo]
[Bass]:[adds chromatic approach notes]:[Tempo]
[Drums]:[midtempo shuffle, ghost notes, rimshots]:[Tempo]

[Am] Наша жизнь тает,
[Dm7] но другую она продлевает.
[G] Капля по капле —
[Cmaj7] река, и всё: реки-реки…
[Fmaj7] И ты — река,
[Em] пока стоишь у истоков
[Dm7] своей реки,
[E7] И помнишь, что мы сейчас все чело-веки...

[Verse 3:]
[Guitar_1]:[call-response with Guitar_2, rhythmic phrasing]:[Tempo]
[Guitar_2]:[call-response with Guitar_1, rhythmic comping]:[Tempo]
[Drums]:[slightly intensified shuffle]:[Tempo]

[Am] Все дела верши,
[Em] не откладывай, не раздумывай…
[Fmaj7] Если ночь пришла,
[Dm] то не смыкай свои веки.
[Cmaj7] И во снах —
[G] на берегу сидим мы у этой реки.
[Dm7] Вроде порознь движемся,
[E7#9] но всё сливается…
[Fmaj7] И пересекаются...
[Em] и пути, и чело-веки, —
[Dm] Все в пути
[E7] к истокам единой для нас реки.

[Outro:]
[Bass]:[groove on progression A, soft fade]:[Tempo]
[Guitar_2]:[groove on progression A, soft fade]:[Tempo]
[Synth]:[ambient pad layer for spatial width]:[Tempo]
[Guitar_1]:[melodic echo of final vocal line, ends with phrase over (Fmaj7|Em|Dm7|E7)]:[Tempo]

[Am] Новый день пришел,
[Dm7] тепла не принес —
[G] Всё брожу по миру,
[Cmaj7] как огнегривый пёс…

[Fade-Out (Progression Fmaj7 ; Em ; Dm7 ; E7)]:
[Bass]:[plays Fmaj7;Em;Dm7;E7, gradually fading out]:[Tempo]
[Guitar_2]:[comping chords Fmaj7;Em;Dm7;E7 with clean Fender tone, smooth diminuendo]:[Tempo]
[Synth]:[sustains ambient pad across Fmaj7;Em;Dm7;E7, then fades]:[Tempo]
[Guitar_1]:[soft echo riff over final chords, resolves on E7]:[Tempo]

[End prompt]
[END]

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(Part2)
Rivers and you speak - © 2025 OnePerson v.1.2S
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[Style: cinematic post-rock fusion, with swelling crescendos, melodic lead lines, atmospheric textures]
[Tempo: 92 BPM]
[Time Signature: 6/8]
[Key: D minor]
[Vocal Style: male baritone, warm legato, restrained vibrato, intimate delivery, dynamic swells]

[Instruments:
[Drums: acoustic kit, 6/8 triplet feel, tom accents on measures 3 & 6, cymbal swells in transitions]
[Bass: deep tube tone, sustained root notes, melodic slides between chord changes]
[Guitar_1: clean electric, arpeggiated chordal pads with delay, occasional melodic double-stops]
[Guitar_2: lead electric, lyrical phrasing with reverb and subtle chorus, counter-melody in verses]
[Strings: synthesized ensemble, warm legato swells under choruses and bridge]
[Pads: ambient synth pad, soft filter sweeps in intros and outros]
]

[Chord Progression:
[A: (Dm | Bb | C | F | Gm | A7)]
[B: (Gm | Dm | Bb | F | C | A7)]
[C: (F | C | Dm | Bb | Gm | A7)]
]

[Post-production:
[Tape emulation on master, plate reverb on vocals and lead guitar, stereo widening on strings, subtle tape delay on Guitar_2]
[Sidechain compress pads to kick drum for rhythmic breathing, EQ carve at 250 Hz on guitars to avoid mud]
]

[Mood/Emotion:
[Theme: quiet desperation, hope beyond the darkness]
[Vibe: introspective, expansive, darkly uplifting]
]

[Lyrics & Instrument Assignments]

[Intro instrumental (Progression A)]
[Drums]:[soft triplet pulse, cymbal swell into next section]:[Tempo]
[Pads]:[warm filter sweep, builds atmosphere]:[Tempo]
[Guitar_1]:[arpeggiated chords Dm|Bb|C]:[Tempo]
[Bass]:[sustained Dm root]:[Tempo]

[Verse 1:]
[Guitar_2]:[counter-melody weaving around vocals]:[Tempo]
[Strings]:[legato swell under vocal lines]:[Tempo]
[Drums]:[tom accents on 3 & 6, light hi-hat triplets]:[Tempo]
[Bass]:[melodic slide from Dm to Bb]:[Tempo]

[Dm] Весна на планету ступила, 
[Bb] Но никто не заметил когда, 
[C] Замёрзшего русла реки 
[F] Не покинуло воинство льда. 
[Gm] И вроде стожары светлы, 
[A7] Да снег колет в ваших глазах, 
[Dm] Несет он пепел и гарь, 
[Bb] И фосфор — с небес бирюза...

[Verse 2:]
[Guitar_2]:[lyrical lead responding to vocal]:[Tempo]
[Pads]:[sustained under entire verse]:[Tempo]
[Drums]:[triplet groove continues, ghost snare on 2]:[Tempo]
[Bass]:[drops to low octave on “чело-веки”]:[Tempo]

[Gm] По горло стоим мы уже 
[Dm] В стремнине чёрной реки, 
[Bb] А сверху то все сапоги, 
[F] А сверху то всё каблуки... 
[Gm] В сумерках беспросветной ночи, 
[A7] Стальной птицей набрав высоту, 
[Dm] Спускаться так тягостно вниз, 
[Bb] Когда виден рассвет на борту.

[Final Verse:]
[Guitar_2]:[soft echo replies to strings]:[Tempo]
[Strings]:[soft legato under final vocals]:[Tempo]
[Drums]:[pull back to hi-hat and kick only]:[Tempo]
[Bass]:[sustained notes, soft slides]:[Tempo]

[Dm] Покоя нет, его когда-нибудь найдут,
[Bb] Лишь те, кто дальше в этот путь
[C] Отправятся уже за нами...
[F] Новый день пришел, покоя не принес, —
[Gm] Всё брожу по миру, как усталый пёс...
[A7] Где присев в тени, где испив водицы —
[Dm] Всё лечу сквозь время незаметной птицею.

[Outro (Progression C):]
[Pads]:[filter out, fading into silence]:[Tempo]
[Strings]:[soft final swell on F|C|Dm]:[Tempo]
[Guitar_1]:[arpeggiated farewell on Bb;Gm]:[Tempo]
[Bass]:[root Dm holds, gradual fade]:[Tempo]

[Fade-Out (Progression Fmaj7;Em;Dm7;E7)]
[Bass]:[plays Fmaj7;Em;Dm7;E7, gradually fading out]:[Tempo]
[Guitar_2]:[comping chords Fmaj7;Em;Dm7;E7 with clean Fender tone, smooth diminuendo]:[Tempo]
[Synth]:[sustains ambient pad across Fmaj7;Em;Dm7;E7, then fades]:[Tempo]
[Guitar_1]:[soft echo riff over final chords, resolves on E7]:[Tempo]

[En prompt]
[END]


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