733. Metalgirl Бахыт-компот Металлистка

перевод "Металлистка" исполнителя Вадим Степанцов и группы "Бахыт-компот"
Читал Алексей Халецкий под минусовку "Rammstein - Engel"
На этот перевод меня вдохновил сериал "Чародей. Страна Великого дракона"

Once visiting a metal party,
Where there was dancing and the bar,
You'd met me, beautiful and younger
Than twelve years old, felt like a star.
Your hair was platinum and blonde,
Like poppy, red, and ripe lips;
With iron-lighted heavy clothes
And shoes were shone with copper deep.

If drinking, dreaming some fructose,
Then I exclaimed to myself,
"You are a heavy metal rose,
A bud in rivets just from hell!"

Like a blade in dangerous razor,
You'd stopped me with your metal look,
And I had said, "You are amazing;
I'm loving you, my heart is dazzled,
But, baby, I don't understand
Why is your armour worn by you?"

So then had opened red-hot mouth;
Your voice then clanged into my ears:
"We'll meet again, and you'll be proud
If heavy metal dries your tears.
Let metal stem fall down forever
Into your young, unused brain,
And let steel flower through your nape
Grow higher with a bloody rain.

Just then, my dear little friendy,
With hardest scars and wounds of blood,
You'll pick this flower in your hands and
Give it to me, the only love.
But now, until you are still squared
And do not shine with heavy rock,
Just listen, pal, get out of there
Wherever you exactly want"

Were piercing into me, like bullets,
Your hardest, hot, and leaden words.
Only at home, my dear mommy,
With a needle, barely took them off.
I thought of her and bite my finger,
What kind of wealth of Soviet is near,
And cried like an old man from my weakness,
As being a sixth grader pioneer.

январь 2025

украинская версия:
http://stihi.ru/2025/01/01/6146
ссылки на оригинал и автора:
http://stihi.ru/2022/07/25/2381
http://stihi.ru/avtor/ststep