I m powerless - English version

(Вариант перевода от ChatGPT):

I'm powerless in soul, my body's drained,
Like a barren bush by winter's cold restrained.
Like a general, by battle's weight, brought low,
Like a traveler, barefoot, hundred miles of woe.
Like a miser, rich, yet life leaves him dismayed,
Like a liar, struck by truth, his words betrayed.
I've forgotten all the little that I knew,
The books I read, the places I passed through...
And what I didn't know, I learned, then lost it too.

(Вариант перевода от Gemini):

I am weak in body, hollow in soul,
Like a winter bush, barren and cold.
Like a general, broken by the fight,
Like a traveler, walking miles through the night.
Like a miser, wealthy but drowning in gloom,
Like a liar, silenced by truth’s heavy doom.
I’ve forgotten the little I once used to know,
The books and the places, the ebb and the flow...
And what I once learned, I let it all go.            


Дата перевода: 11 августа 2024 года.
Перевод осуществлён с помощью нейросетей.

Я английским лично владею крайне плохо, чтобы оценить всю красоту стиха после перевода. Если кто прекрасно владеет английским - буду рад критике, замечаниям, исправлениям.