Love me happy,
Love me stupid
Every movement, every step.
Be attached U clumsy cupid,
Did I sleep or was I dead?
Kiss me slowly,
Kiss me freaky,
Make me dizzy, feelin' lost.
No, kissing isn't licking,
R U there, the flashin' ghost?
Am I dreamin' ?
R W trippin' ?
R U digital or what?
I can't feel U, are U sleepin'?
Now I do. At last. Jackpot!
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Sleeping Beauty
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As far as I understand, it’s not a description of Love. It’s just the description for a wild, vulgar and crazy sexual collision. Obviously, everyone writes about things needed and extremely necessary. Although, it seems to me, Shakespeare's language is not so primitive to describe only sexual pleasure. I’d like to ask where are the high feelings, where is the depth of sole ? I wouldn't want to think that your knowledge of English is only enough to write primitive sexual process. May be You will be able to show us deeper English poetry skills ? It would be very interesting personally for me to see Your talent shining bright. Friendly Yours.
Влад Светлый 08.06.2025 13:51 • Заявить о нарушении
Влад Светлый 08.06.2025 13:51 • Заявить о нарушении
Vlad!
Wouldn't You like to ask Bob Dilan to write in russian?:)
Thank You for the challenge, in due time I'll give it a try! 👋🙂
Лариса Самохина 08.06.2025 16:25 Заявить о нарушении
Wouldn't You like to ask Bob Dilan to write in russian?:)
Thank You for the challenge, in due time I'll give it a try! 👋🙂
Лариса Самохина 08.06.2025 16:25 Заявить о нарушении
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