There will be night

There will be night, and will be end,
an end of pain, desire, sound,
who has no love, who has no friend
at last will disappear in ground.
And eyes in sorrow will not meet
a dying rose, and filthy moan,
and will not come an awful beat
to wounded soul that is alone.
There will be night, of pain instead,
will not be awful, bad desire,
maybe - a body, naked, dead
will go into abyss of fire.
And he will kill, he will revoke,
all evil, pain, at any scale,
with rapid passage of the smoke,
the final point of a tale.


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the final point of the tale.
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the final point of a rueful tale.
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And he will kill, he will revoke,
all evil, pain, in sufferland,
with rapid passage of the smoke,
as point at the tale’s end.
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with fast erasing of the smoke (звучит канцелярски).
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with fast dispersion of the smoke,
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with rapid rising of the smoke,
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with rising of the limpid smoke,
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with flight of the unheeded smoke,
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with the unheeded flight of smoke,
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with the unheeded flux of smoke,
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then will be flight of limpid smoke,
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and wind will carry limpid smoke,
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there will be flight, a flight of smoke,
*
then will be flight of dust and smoke,

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Оригинал (стихотворение "Настанет ночь", 31.07.2023):
 
Настанет ночь, и всё уймётся,
уймётся боль, порывы, звук,
рука что у лица трясётся,
и сердца раненого стук.
Глаза в печали не увидят
как давят ласковый венок,
и миги больше не обидят
того, кто вечно одинок.
Настанет ночь, неся благое,
и разум боли не найдёт,
и тело бледное, нагое,
в огни горячие войдёт.
И возгорят былые раны,
его последняя весна,
и улетят его туманы
в долину немоты и сна.

 
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Для сравнения, предыдущий вариант:
 
There will be night, and will be end,
an end of pain, desire, sound,
who has no love, who has no friend
will disappear in deep of ground.
And eyes in sorrow will not meet
a dying rose, and filthy moan,
and will not come an awful beat
to soul what wounded and alone.
There will be night, of pain instead,
will not be awful, bad desire,
and maybe - body, naked, dead
will go in abyss of the fire.
And he will kill, he will revoke,
all evil, pain, in any scale,
and will be flight of easy smoke,
as point in the end of tale.