When no longer young

You are used to disrupt with your voice and wild screaming,
Doesn't matter how many emotions will die.
And your youth always promises cure for your feeling
But all this is another erroneous lie.

Spraying into the wind like drops of a fountain,
You're depriving yourself of the chance to be loved.
Like a mudslide that knocks down trees from the mountain
You are terribly killing what you have been strived.

But the laws of the nature are not less indifferent,
You will sure, when the moment of truth will come
And your youth, which gave strength and was beauty and viverent
Will stop out and close up. Then your old age will run.

Your ambition and pride will soon fade like an autumn.
Time will steal tooth with tooth from your each older gum,
Then remember your furious cry at your loved one,
As the reason for sadness and this outcome.

While you are still so young, don't break down the walls
They all need to be strengthened and built with all might.
Otherwise there will be no one human with goals
To be staying with you and belong to your side.

There is one thing can place your formation above
Disagreements and strife that destroy our world.
This significant thing since the ancient is love,
And without it exactly there's nothing to hold.


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Под впечатлением от Вашего глубокого творения и кропотливого поэтического труда.
Спасибо, Павел.
Новых творческих успехов!
С теплом и уважением,

Ника Трофимова   11.02.2024 21:26     Заявить о нарушении
Благодарю, Ника, за добрые слова.
Польщён, что Вы так вы высоко оценили произведение.
Со всей взаимностью, и сверху того ещё у Господа Бога за Вас попрошу.
С уважением,

Павел Андреевичевский   12.02.2024 00:09   Заявить о нарушении
🌞🕊🙏🙏🙏

Ника Трофимова   12.02.2024 07:29   Заявить о нарушении
На это произведение написаны 3 рецензии, здесь отображается последняя, остальные - в полном списке.