Tell me, why?

We just have stopped seeing the evil,
Until we face it here again.
And, having done good things in level,
We lose the soul, taking gain.

Looking for love, we share meanness.
Having ignored common sense,
We've legalized chaos and madness,
Having take part in dirty dance.

We trust, already have been woonded,
Trying to justify the lie.
Kindness is now mostly wanted,
But people are dying. Tell me, why?


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Your question resembles
The one of teenager -
Rethorical, hollow
Weak and naiv,
As buzzing of fly,
Being bloody and major,
My grandma would nod
To it's bleak narrativ.

Just sayin', sensitive topic... 👋

Лариса Самохина   08.06.2025 17:26     Заявить о нарушении
I love it when my reviews hurt the pride of guests. Just a balm for my soul. Wildly Yours, darling.

Влад Светлый   09.06.2025 00:33   Заявить о нарушении
See?
Here goes problem.
English is not our mother tongue,
it's easy to be misunderstood.

My pride and honor remain to be immaculate, as Caesar's wife. To hurt me is not in Your power.

And I really don't like men's helpless statements, sorry 'bout that.
Learn to take criticism with gratitude.
I do.
It's easier to be silent.

Let's try to be more polite to each other in the future.

My best wishes,

Лариса Самохина   09.06.2025 01:41   Заявить о нарушении
You see, I did not mean to hurt You, my dear. Sorry. It was just a lightly sarcastic motion of mine. Glad You are so strong and honourable. Maybe poetry will help us to become a little bit closer to each other in the future. My best wishes to You.

Влад Светлый   24.07.2025 01:55   Заявить о нарушении