What is your name?

Seems to me, I've misheard or mistaken,
When you asked me: "Miss, what is your name?"
So mysterious, all of a sudden
And so hopeful began our game...

But it's true - I've just gotten a question,
You're waiting so patiently for;
Wow, it's me, whom you've honoured to mention,
Smiling kindly... a minute ago!..

I have answered you briefly and mildly,
Thinking, God really gives me a chance
And my heart has begun to jump wildly,
And my body just wanted to dance!

"Sign up, please! You have gotten a parcel",-
In a businesslike manner you said
And my prince from a wonderful castle
Has escaped to the Post-office land...


Русский вариант стихотворения "Как Вас зовут?":  http://www.stihi.ru/2015/04/28/120


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Chris, that's awesome! I think you should definitely write more in English. How about we team up and give it a try? Let's pick a topic, and each of us will write a quatrain, for instance..)

Алекс Штейнберг   02.03.2024 16:40     Заявить о нарушении
Thank You so much, dear Sasha)
I'm definitely ready to work in a team with You!:))

Кристина Гранта   02.03.2024 17:26   Заявить о нарушении
In the experimental way, I'm starting:

My dear loving, caring friend
Our love is coming to the end
I don't know how to save the day
So I will slowly go away...

Кристина Гранта   02.03.2024 19:17   Заявить о нарушении
my dear friend, with heart so kind,
our journey's end, alas, we find.
though love may fade, I won't betray,
I'll cherish moments, come what may.

Алекс Штейнберг   03.03.2024 20:01   Заявить о нарушении
But still... I can't forget the days
Of our loving in the rays
The rays of moon - so wild and free
Let's keep in mind this memory...

Кристина Гранта   05.03.2024 00:21   Заявить о нарушении
In moonlit nights our love did bloom,
But now, it's time to leave this room.

Алекс Штейнберг   06.03.2024 00:17   Заявить о нарушении