Exit in Blue

waves of the real
hesitation of fire
out of time       
this new world is entire
stationed desire
lightness in motion
grace through the sunshine
rains across oceans


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I like how “hesitation” and “motion” play against each other, like breath caught between stillness and flow. It reads kinda like the architecture of a dream where the world rebuilds itself in layers of grace.

Староминскаяя   18.09.2025 20:43     Заявить о нарушении
Thank you, ma'am :) Your remark about "the architecture of a dream where the world rebuilds itself" somehow reminded me of the totally mesmerising beginning of Peter Gabriel's "Mercy Street"...

Андре Апт   19.09.2025 22:50   Заявить о нарушении