I do remember everything
That we were going through -
Your lips, your hands, your scent
Which I am missing too.
I know time will be coming soon
We'll be in our own,
Then everything that means to you
I'll share in full of prone.
Remember You
© Copyright: Лилия Белая, 2018
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Hi there! Your poems are something! I do believe in You! Please, consider that "time will coming soon" ( it's Pr.Cont. and it's better to say "will be coming". Do You agree with me?)
Андрей Боровков 10.12.2018 08:19 • Заявить о нарушении
Андрей Боровков 10.12.2018 08:19 • Заявить о нарушении
Hi Andrew, I do understand how important is to follow the whole grammar rules and be clear in your expressions same time! So, why I am gladly admitted all my mistakes and admire person who can notice those mistakes and pointed them to me.
Thank you very much again!
And also thanks for your opinion about my writing in English!
All the best to you too in your creations!
Lily
Лилия Белая 10.12.2018 08:56 Заявить о нарушении
Thank you very much again!
And also thanks for your opinion about my writing in English!
All the best to you too in your creations!
Lily
Лилия Белая 10.12.2018 08:56 Заявить о нарушении