What means to be your girlfriend

Марина Сильвер
What means to be your girlfriend
Now I know, that seemed not real somewhere.
You were so young, I was so carefree
We were to lost so many time then.
And now you're in a prison
And we again lost so many time.
Maybe it's my destiny
To lose my favorite men-
One died, the other in a prison.
I suppose, not bad luck me in love-
Because for the happiness in love,
I always pay a high price in life.

december 2018.
 


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Hi there! Is it a misspelling in the line "I were so carefree"? May be "I was"? In the line "We were to lost so many time then", is it better to say "many times"? If i were You i'll put "is" and an article "a" before "prison" in the line :"the other in prison". Misspelling: "suppourse" may be "suppose"? Not "I always paying", but "pay" (the Pr.Ind.tense). Good luck!

Андрей Боровков   09.12.2018 03:25   •   Заявить о нарушении
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Hi, thanks. Just when I write on emotion, sometimes forget how it's true that if the language had not used.

Марина Сильвер   09.12.2018 21:46   Заявить о нарушении
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