Играя Моцарта с моим Джоном. Иван и Луиза

IVAN and LUIZA.
The roman in the poems.
"Роман в стихах" "Играя Моцарта с моим Джонном. Иван и Луиза".

Это первый классический минималистский англо-русско-американский " роман в стихах", как "Евгений Онегин" великого русского поэта А.С.Пушкина, с аллюзиями на пьесу Шекспира "Отелло", роман Агаты Кристи " Зернышки в кармане", роман Вальтера Скотта "Айвенго", роман Ф.М.Достоевского "Преступление и наказание", роман " Маргарет Митчелл "Унесенные ветром" и Библию (глава "Бытие" и "Евангелие" "Нового Завета"). Роман в стихах Натальи Пономаревой написан преимущественно 4-стопным ямбом. Главная Героиня Луиза испытывает классический внутренний конфликт русских пьес 18 века - " Долга и страсти". В текст произведения также вплетены переводы хитов Аллы Пугачевой "Примадонна" и Алексея Глызина "Поздний вечер в Сорренто", а также текст песни Мадонны "The power of goodbye".
Время действия романа - 80-е гг.20 века, США. Действующие лица: певица Луиза 30 лет - блондинка с голосом Кристины Агилеры и стилем одежды певицы Мадонны в 80-е гг.20 века, Иван - американский банкир с Уолл-Стрит из России, 35 лет, Генри - успешный ковбой с Юга США, владелец 5 пастбищ в Южных Штатах, 34 года, Айвенго - стриптизер из Лондона, любивший творчество писателя Вальтера Скотта и его роман " Айвенго", 33 года.
Иван - это самое древнее русское мужское имя, это традиционный персонаж всех русских народных сказок (Иван-царевич или Иван-дурак). John - это "Иван" по-английски!


Exposition

I've heard about your love-story,
About war, about peace,
About gentelmen and glory,
About chocolate and twist!
About Royal Architecture,
About markets on the streets,
About voices in wild nature,
About ocean of the tears...

What could I do with you, romantic?
Without dollars for your dreams?
Where is your home? Where is your lady?
The road to your home's between...
Between two tragedies in Russia,
Between two little drama things,
Between the tounge and ache of stomach,
Between the luckiness and the risk!

Autumn wind begans so brightly and so strongly,
The last leaf goes down on the road...
Forest goes to bed... Oh, dont you
Want to see me dancing with you? Draw
Me picture of October evening:
Golden flowers, golden Moscow snow!
I am singing opera with Glinka!
I am playing Mozart with my John (Lennon)!

CHAPTER 1.
Ivan and Luiza.
1.
My hero was unwise, but happy:
He had much money in the bank,
His car of Henry Ford was greitful,
He didnt like vodka, but he drank
Sometimes a bottle of French wine,
And Crimea wine in dancing hall,
He liked the risk and Russian Drama,
He liked the singing best of all!

2.
The jokes and dancing were his passion,
The singing was his passion, too!
He was not lord, polite and handsome,
But he was clever, like the God!
He was from Russia - Land of Magic,
Where gold and oil are the kings,
Where people like to sing the soul,
Where It was winning of facism!

3.
The Melody of his heartbeat!
The skies in his eyes are so blue!
The dancing of leafs is the best thing,
The Love of his Motherland's true!

He tried to run out of forests,
But there's never ending at all!
He wanted to kiss golden Autumn
And cried with his all Russian girls!

He loves You, my Rissia, he loves You!
The rye and the bread on his meal,
The bears, the rabbits, the tigers -
He loves all Your forests and fields!

4.
The reason of his fire in soul
Was Godness of the scene - Luiza!
She was so beatiful and strong!
She sang like Christy Aguilera!
Blue eyes, blond hair, red lips shining...
She was fantastic and unwising!
She liked to read detective stories
And Pushkin's poems and his romans!

5.
Luiza prayed in church as Godness,
The Bible was her favorite book!
"Dont kill!", " Dont lie!", "Dont change your husband!"
That were the laws of Godness true!
She talk to Mother Marry quietly:
"You are my Dream of Lady,
I am sure, please, tell me at once!
We must be all together!
I am crazy of You in my eyes!"

6.
My Ivan saw Luiza praying
In church near the "Hollywood".
He falled in love at once, I'm sure
She was her destiny - he thought!
At first, inviting on blind-date and
Romantic dinner, by the way,
At second, there were many presents
For princess of a million heads!
He gave her dresses, couts, whiskey,
Bags with the money and the gold!
But that was sorrow for my Ivan:
Luiza's heart was cold as frost!

What could he do with burning feelings?
He cried, and cried the Ocean there!
The words of love about Luiza
Was all he thought, was all he need!

7.
Luiza was as fairytale,
She wrote some letters to her fans:

The first her letter to friend Henry:

" The red rose of yesterday evening,
Your love was so wonderfull, too!
We were unwise, I believed you...
You asked me: "How do you do?"

Your red lips were like kisses of apple,
Big blue eyes were like picture of sea...
The were... Like... Like a happy trouble:
Be lost and forgotten... You'll see...

You will see, I am strong and fantastic:
I am beatiful Godness of Love!
I am young, I am old, I am dancing
In waves with my big burning heart!"

8.
The second letter to Ivengo:

"Ivengo was my dear friend:
The novell of the freedom,
About dreams, about land
Of Magic and the dinner!

We'll go away from cruel world
To reach the perfact happiness!
I'm kind, polite, you are my lord,
And now you are the best friend!

I'll be your princess of the nights,
You'll be my King of poets!
My Robin Hood, the best of knights!
Lets open our show!"

9.
The third letter to Henry:

"Your heart is not open, so I must go
The spell has been broken, I loved you so
Freedom comes when you learn to let go
Creation comes when you learn to say no

You were my lesson, I had to learn
I was your fortress, you had to burn
Pain is a warning that something's wrong
I pray to God that it won't be long
Do you wanna go higher?"

CHAPTER 2.
Генри, дуэль Ивана с Генри
The duel between Ivan and Henry

1.
My blue-eyed owner of the bank
Was dressed in blackest-blackest smoking!
His shoes from "Gucci" was the best!
You cannot read of them or talking!
He burned in fire with the envy
Because of love of his Luiza!
He hate all fans of her, hate Henry,
Because he had the cows and cheese!

2.
Her Henry was so kind and gentle
As It was sunshine under havens!
He had not "Bently", he had prairies -
The hero of the forest, champion!
Our Henry was simpleton, sorry!
As kind as fool under the Moon!
My reader, you must not be worry:
The tragedy will be so soon!

3.
The pistols duel was beginning
As river runs along the bridge!
Their meeting was in friday evening,
When children went to bed or beach!
My Ivan was like the tornado!
Tornado in the smoking. So
He shot the temple of the Henry
And said to him: " Show must go on!"
The rivers of his blood was coming,
He took back cruel words again!
But Ivan was as cruel Bunny,
He couldnt believe he won the game!

4.
The funeral of Henry was there
Where Sun is shining and Its hot,
Where waterfull was full of roses,
Where palmtrees grew and you cant stop
The crying of the Ocean of tears
Of relatives, and friends, and God!
Because our Henry was the best boy,
He was the man of Sun and Gold!



CHAPTER 3.
Айвенго. Иван даёт много денег для Айвенго, чтобы тот отказался от любви к Луизе.
Money for Ivengo

1.
Ivengo was like London dandy,
He was so handsome as a prince!
His manners were prim like a lady's
And freakish character was him!
Ivengo was as lord - so proud!
Like Ivan Grozny he was cruel!
But he could give you so much pounds
And could you challenge to a duel!
Striptease was dancing of the soul
That gave him money for the life!
He took off dress and weared the cout
Once, twice and fifty five!

2.
Once Ivan saw Luiza dancing
And singing with Ivengo Star!
It was not happy chance to him and
He drove so far away his car!
Luiza felt a trembling of kneers,
Became so slim as shadow doll!
Ivengo hold so strong Luiza
That she could not to make a call!

3.
But Ivan was so sly as foxy!
He gave a million dollars to
Ivengo. Plan was toxic!
As toxic as a poison girl!

4.
Luiza left alone as sorrow!
She drank her whiskey in the bar!
But Ivan would with her tomorrow:
He asked her hand to be as wife!


CHAPTER 4. Свадьба Ивана и Луизы. Измены Луизы.

The wedding of Ivan and Luiza. Luiza's changes.

1.
Shampain and roses on the wedding,
The sounds of the prays in church!
It was like songs of Missis Carrey -
I wanna feel her dreams in touch!

Luiza was in white dress wearing,
Red roses were over her head!
Her heart was like a fire burning,
It burns like sunrise over land!

2.
Luiza was as Queen of Magic,
She was the Devil and the Star!
She must sing songs so hard on stage and
Pray themes of Elvis on guitar!

The King of rock'n'roll and show,
White costume with the snow wings!
He sings in mind today, tomorrow!
My Elvis was the best of kings!

3.
My Ivan was like king of poets,
Black smoking, jazz and "Gucci" shoes!
There was a frost on winter cout...
I'm gonna change my mind to loose

My thoughts, my quiet happy mornings,
He made me crazy over him!
There will be crying, callings, callings
Of girls who was in love with him!

4.
My Ivan burned three colors candles,
Red apples falled on table there...
My Autumn wind sang happy chance to
Come as frost without mistakes!

My darlings were so happy people,
They were like doves in love themselves!
My God, bless Ivan and Luiza
And make believe in happy end!

5.
Luiza's changes

At first, Luiza was so happy,
She lived like Angel in the sky!
She got all of what she's waiting
For all her life without cryies.

There were the kisses under moonlight,
There were the dancing on the balls,
That was the power under twilight
Of being happy, but alone!

6.
At first, her loneliness was trouble,
At second, being one was fun!
At third, she didnt want be mother,
Her loneliness became a gun!

And changes were beginning with her,
She changed her husband all day long,
She lied, then - cryied and prayed for Ivan!
But happy life was only phone!



CHAPTER 5.
The toxic for Luiza
Иван заказывает убийство Луизы из ревности, но вместо яда оказывается сахар, и Луиза остаётся жива! Иван улетает в Россию. Стихи "The deep night in Sorrento" в финале (перевод хита Алексея Глызина "Поздний вечер в Сорренто").

My Ivan was so evil when he
Knew things about his Luiza!
Her changes were so countless, maybe,
That It was people's reprobation!
What could he do, my poor Ivan?
When husbands lauphed at him together?
When wifes behaved like not a Lady!
He couldnt teech new generation
Of something good. So he decided
To poison his ex-wife Luiza!
And he did it.
Let's listen to how It was.

My hero Ivan bought the bane!
Where? We dont know, he didnt say us!
He took the cup of tea and poured
The venom into cooking battery!
Then Ivan send all his invitings
To all of lovers of Luiza
And there will be his favorite party -
" The Russian Tea-Time" with surprices!

Friend Frank was coming, and Diego,
And Willy, and Hussein, and Billy!
" Tea party" as the toys of "Lego"
Was full of jokes and songs in April!
Because It was an April Fool's Day!
But bane was ready for Luiza!
My Ivan lauphed and listened to the
His favorite music! Oh, Luiza!

Luiza came in hall. "Diego?
What are you doing here? Willy?"
She took the cup of tea, and "Lego"
Was smashing on the floor. Oh, Billy!
She drank the cup of tea! Luiza!
But there was sugar instead of toxic
In cup of tea that she was drinking!
My Ivan laughed at her, believe me,
And took his ticket for the airplain.

Airplain to Russia - land of Winter
Where It was snowing, It was raining!
His song about Russian boys for
His wife Luiza was like this:


"The deep night in Sorrento"

There's a frost in your eyelashes...
And the Clock sang our Autumn!
Midnight will hide in blue Haven
Flight "fifteen, and eight, and forty"

You dont hide your perfact sorrow
Under veil of gentle smiling...
Russian boy is flying home.
The November will be crying!

Chorus:
The deep night in Sorrento!
Weather plays in its game with us!
There's the end of the Summer,
Say "goodbye" to my Italy!

We will take leave of Love,
Our song ends like Drama,
But we're feeling the power
Of the night in Sorrento!

We are long ago like strangers,
Like Its all was only dreaming!
The nostalgia of blue sea...
All we had I see dissolving!

Why do lips and I search for
The warm shelter on your mouth?
But I see the tears in your eyes
And the sound of the hour!