Among the clear hot summer
The winter visited unexpectedly.
A hail knocked strongly on the window frame:
"What, was not waiting? But I came. "
So were knocked at your door,
You opened, there stands winter.
On the doorstep you were frozen whole
Because chilling words were freezing your soul.
And a cold white snowstorm
Whirled you in the snow whirlwind.
And the ring of that circle was shrinking,
You took all the pain on yourself, thinking.
And you did not sleep until dawn,
And only was thinking about that
That your sultry summer passed, where to roam
And the winter knocked at your home.
All the warmth of a summer night was carried away by
History from the winter cold stripes.
At parting a strand of luxurious light-brown hair
Was covered with white snow despair.
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© Copyright: Антониа Ирина Голь, 2017
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Check your definite and indefinite articles.
Whirled you in the snow whirlwind.
This phrase is unacceptable.
Зус Вайман 19.11.2019 19:52 • Заявить о нарушении
Whirled you in the snow whirlwind.
This phrase is unacceptable.
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Have you read the book “Embrace the Whirlwind” by Laurel-Rain Snow (Goodreads Author)? Thank you for taking the time to discuss the articles.
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Антониа Ирина Голь 21.11.2019 15:49 Заявить о нарушении
Articles throughout your text are missing or wr
Did you read The Elements of Style ???
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Did you read The Elements of Style ???
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