Hi There!

Hi there! It's been a hundred years
Since we became two strangers...
It's not as bad as it appears.
Time passes, nothing changes.

I'm still in Washington, D.C.,
And you're in California.
You'd rather die than write to me,
And I won't dare to phone you.

You know, I don't remember why
We always had to fight,
And now there is no need to try
To find out who was right.

Hi there! September's coming soon,
The trees are getting yellow.
I love this time, this shining moon,
These mornings, misty, mellow...

I'm still the one who's pleased to see
The gloomy signs of autumn,
Who hides with books, a cup of tea
And moments long forgotten.

Hi there! I wish you could return
To share a silly story,
To bring a good new song to learn
Or simply say "I'm sorry".

But we'll keep silent like two fools,
No, we won't make it plain,
Won't stop this game, won't break the rules!
We'll only wait in vain,

For I'm in Washington, D.C.,
And you're in California.
You'd rather die than write to me,
And I won't dare to phone you.


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It hit me hard, i nearly lost my mind
I realized the sin that i commit
By leaving you so very far behind
It makes my dreams so pointless, incomplete.

Never before i realised my love for you
And that I'd miss you
But since I've gone, I'm here alone and blue
My reckless soul has caused this stupid issue

The Californian dream is shattered
Because its price is losing you;
Neglecting love, the only thing that really matters
What have i done... how awfully cruel...

I know the pain you must be feeling,
And that is why i'm coming back
Is there a chance of your faith healing?
Or is it now forever cracked?

Let's take the risk and start all over
Embrace the autumn, stop to yearn!
But if you see me as a rover...
Sigh...
Myself I chose the toughest way to learn.

Олег Реут   07.09.2016 20:38     Заявить о нарушении
Quite an interesting interpretation of my poem. I must admit, though, that I imagined this character as a stubborn one who wouldn't have gently surrendered at once. Anyway, thanks for such a creative response :)

Полина Кочина   24.08.2016 22:20   Заявить о нарушении
На это произведение написаны 2 рецензии, здесь отображается последняя, остальные - в полном списке.