нужен совет англичан

Это мой первый опыт такого плана, буду признателен за помощь и советы


We have lost The Last.
Seven years passed.
How he lost his bill
Can remember still:

Walked throw fire zone.
Crazy, but alone.
Blessed by God his gun -
Second was to none.

Fight with enemies...
Thousands, but he is
Knocking on hell's door -
Master of the War.

We have lost The Last.
Idol from the past.
But he shows the way -
Fight for what we pray.


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Darling, stop the Wars!
Come to peace!
It's summer outdoors...

Your creation is rather smart.

Марина Рощина   07.08.2016 11:26     Заявить о нарушении
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