Red

Your delicious rufous hair,
Gives you some zest,
I like that shade, you my mare,
Can I touch your chest?

A joke, I just want to be with you,
I'm drowning in your blue eyes like the ocean,
And I'm burning in your red hair as in fire, true,
Maybe someone has poured in my goblet potion?


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Your acrostics are incorrect, and what foreign poems in Russian portal! Do you speak English?:)

Владимир Евгеньевич Замыслов   08.02.2017 00:03     Заявить о нарушении
It's not acrostic. Why not? It's my first try to write on English. Yes, of course I speak. If I hadn't spoken I wouldn't have written this poem.

Дейнар Пинсет   14.02.2017 00:23   Заявить о нарушении
Well, good luck to You , and acrostics better to write in Russian. I translated all the sonnets of Shakespeare, but I do not like English, dearer to me than my Russian.:)

Владимир Евгеньевич Замыслов   14.02.2017 09:11   Заявить о нарушении
Здесь желательно писать только на русском языке, не поймут...:)

Владимир Евгеньевич Замыслов   14.02.2017 09:13   Заявить о нарушении