Посвящаю Dню Независимости Израиля Йом а-Ацмаут

Написано вместе  с Симоной Пекер.

Симона Пекер написала  как рецензию на:
http://www.stihi.ru/2012/03/18/1857

The Holy Land, we'll praise forever,
As long as we're alive,
And though not there, we'll sacrifice
If ever called upon...
 

Мой отклик,
 

Through centuries and clouds, тhrough prayers and white shrouds
We're back on the forefathers' land.   
By hoards of enemies outmanned, again we're staying hand in hand,
    
We're Jews and we are proud дeclaring very loud
- It's our heart, it's our soul, 
IT'S OUR LAND!


Рецензии
Through centuries and clouds, тhrough prayers and white shrouds
We're back on forefathers land.
By hords of enemies outmanned again we're staying hand in hand,

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Through centuries and clouds, through prayers and white shrouds
We're back on the forefathers' land.
By hordes of enemies outmanned again we're standing hand in hand,



Зус Вайман   21.10.2016 22:10     Заявить о нарушении
Замечание по делу.
Спасибо, Зус.
С уважением,

Григорий Вольф   21.10.2016 23:50   Заявить о нарушении
На это произведение написаны 3 рецензии, здесь отображается последняя, остальные - в полном списке.