Отклик на стих «Даже если весь мир пойдёт на тебя войной» (Зубакина)
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** 17.12.2013 **
Вместе вы - сила!
© Copyright: Анюта Аксёнова, 2014
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Замечательно,выразительно,впечатлительно,мне очень понравилось,с теплом,обнимаю
Жюр22 25.07.2015 11:47 • Заявить о нарушении
Жюр22 25.07.2015 11:47 • Заявить о нарушении
Эта дамочка не даст тебя в обиду!..
Заказать врагу придётся панихиду! ;)
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Спасибо, дорогой Жюрушка! :)
Приятен твой отклик! )))
С ответными обнимашками и теплом,
Твоя Анютик
Анюта Аксёнова 25.07.2015 11:56 Заявить о нарушении
Заказать врагу придётся панихиду! ;)
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Спасибо, дорогой Жюрушка! :)
Приятен твой отклик! )))
С ответными обнимашками и теплом,
Твоя Анютик
Анюта Аксёнова 25.07.2015 11:56 Заявить о нарушении
Твой портретик так хорош,
Жду,когда ко мне придёшь?
Целую тебя,милая Анютик
Жюр22 25.07.2015 11:59 Заявить о нарушении
Жду,когда ко мне придёшь?
Целую тебя,милая Анютик
Жюр22 25.07.2015 11:59 Заявить о нарушении
Приходила, наследила!..
Испарилась, как светило! ;)
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С улыбашками-обнимашками )))
Анюта Аксёнова 25.07.2015 12:31 Заявить о нарушении
Испарилась, как светило! ;)
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С улыбашками-обнимашками )))
Анюта Аксёнова 25.07.2015 12:31 Заявить о нарушении
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