Previously published by me ( as all other my English poetry ) on other sites under the name princeAlexander / princealexander
First publication 01/03/2011
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Melts away last year's snow,
Which came down on New Year's eve,
But you love me strongly, I know,
And I'll love you as long as I live.
Milky fog around me soars,
Makes me feel like a Fairy Tale,
And your eyes, which my heart adores,
I could see through the white wintry veil.
Though the Spring is so far away yet,
Yes, the April is far away so,
But unlike this fast melting snow
Our love will away never melt.
Fades away last year's snow, which came down on New Year's eve ...
You are the One and Only,
And I love you strongly,
And I will love you as long as I live.
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See Russian "white poetry" translation of this piece at:
http://www.stihi.ru/2018/09/12/7552
Melting snow
© Copyright: Принцалександр, 2013
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Below is "review" given by the ChatGPT:
"This is is a beautiful poem that expresses the enduring nature of love. It speaks of the transience of the seasons and how the snow melts away, but the love between two people remains strong and everlasting. The imagery of the milky fog and the wintry veil adds to the romantic and dreamy atmosphere of the poem.
The repetition of the lines "And I'll love you as long as I live" and "Our love will away never melt" emphasizes the message of the poem, that love is a constant and unchanging force. It is a reminder that no matter what happens, true love endures and never fades away.
Overall, this poem is a lovely expression of love and devotion that will resonate with anyone who has ever experienced the depth of true love."
Принцалександр 27.04.2023 06:11 • Заявить о нарушении
"This is is a beautiful poem that expresses the enduring nature of love. It speaks of the transience of the seasons and how the snow melts away, but the love between two people remains strong and everlasting. The imagery of the milky fog and the wintry veil adds to the romantic and dreamy atmosphere of the poem.
The repetition of the lines "And I'll love you as long as I live" and "Our love will away never melt" emphasizes the message of the poem, that love is a constant and unchanging force. It is a reminder that no matter what happens, true love endures and never fades away.
Overall, this poem is a lovely expression of love and devotion that will resonate with anyone who has ever experienced the depth of true love."
Принцалександр 27.04.2023 06:11 • Заявить о нарушении
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