Requiem

I see your eyes, so blind tomorrow,
I know the way of peace and sorrow.

And far away – attractive Eden,
Can be so close, if life is beaten.

I tried that Love
In many circumstances,
The Lord above
Had given many chances.

And in the end,
Between the death and hollow,
My days are spent
And there`s no need to follow.


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Alexandre, many thanks for your invitation! I've appreciated your poetry:) Best regards,IvOlga

Шотландская Иволга   26.06.2013 00:00     Заявить о нарушении
Thank you very much, my dear collegue, it`s always nice to meet such a speicial person like you are. Best wishes Alex)

Александр Июлин   26.06.2013 00:05   Заявить о нарушении
Sure? Why do you think I'm special???

Шотландская Иволга   26.06.2013 00:15   Заявить о нарушении
There`s no doubt you`re special, because you`re the one who share great poetic mood with me tonight.

Александр Июлин   26.06.2013 00:20   Заявить о нарушении
Could it be just sleeplessness? :)

Шотландская Иволга   26.06.2013 00:25   Заявить о нарушении
No way! It couldn`t be so. The only reason is you)

Александр Июлин   26.06.2013 00:30   Заявить о нарушении
Mutual admiration society? :)))

Шотландская Иволга   26.06.2013 00:48   Заявить о нарушении
Ahaha) The only thing that I can say - I surely admire your creativity. And I can`t guess if this admiration mutual or not.

Александр Июлин   26.06.2013 01:01   Заявить о нарушении
To tell the truth, I don't know yet. I've just seen your invitation and looked through some of your poems. Appreciated that they are SPECIAL :) and attractive. And this one has drawn my attention by its reference "in foreign languages". The further conclusion will be next time, when I hope I will get a chance to "taste" the others. See you :), Olga

Шотландская Иволга   26.06.2013 20:51   Заявить о нарушении
I understand. I hope you`ll taste every meal of my modest poetic efforts. See you soon.

Александр Июлин   28.06.2013 13:38   Заявить о нарушении