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Я в ручьязх утонувшего лета,
Как кораблик несбывшихся грёз.
В гости жду, я твой Лучик привета,
Разгони память/гавань от гроз.
Я не плачу, в Любви невозможо,
Не послать свой сигнал из души.
Поцелую тебя всё возможно,
Ты в ответ мне - Люблю напиши.
Как боюсь не услышать дыханье,
В переливах твой голос души.
Ты мне Лучик как эхо признанье,
Пару точек.. как "Да " - напиши...
4 мая 2013
Я в ручьязх утонувшего лета
© Copyright: Стихи Незнакомке, 2013
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