Стих-вдохновитель - "Хватит?" (Мега Паша)
http://stihi.ru/2012/07/10/1549
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В автобусе узрел ты незнакомку, -
в душе твоей произошла поломка:
Юна, стройна, с красивою причёской
и с макияжем ярким, но неброским.
А дома ждёт жена в простом халате,
и дети плачут, как всегда некстати,
и ежедневный быт давно приелся,
и чувств накал, увы, куда-то делся...
Готов отдать ты жемчуга и злата,
чтоб день быть холостым, а не женатым.
К попутчице ты подошёл бы смело
и пригласил на кофе, между делом.
Какой бы там потом ни вышел случай,
но совесть бы тебя не стала мучить.
Но ты женат. И не случится чуда:
ведро в дверях, немытая посуда...
Бессмысленны надежды и уловки...
Ты выйдешь на знакомой остановке
Умчится вдаль автобус с незнакомкой,
издав прощальный вздох - протяжный, громкий...
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Эй, выше нос! Твоя жена «в ударе»:
ждёт мужа не в халате, - в пеньюаре,
детишек отвезла к бабуле-тёще,
накрасилась — во всеоружьи, в общем!
А незнакомка в дом вошла понуро,
сняв макияж и облачив фигуру
в застиранный и старенький халатик...
Тебе себя жалеть, пожалуй, хватит!
** 10.03.2013 **
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Проза жизни
© Copyright: Анюта Аксёнова, 2013
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Рецензии
А я свою первую "Незнакомку" встретил в салоне троллейбуса и написал первое стихотворение-посвящение. Только это очень давно было.:)))
Анечка, заканчивай хандрить и начинай писать. У Тебя очень талантливо получается и жаль, что так редко Ты радуешь нас новыми творениями.
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С теплом,
Вячеслав Знакомый 26.04.2015 15:56 • Заявить о нарушении
Анечка, заканчивай хандрить и начинай писать. У Тебя очень талантливо получается и жаль, что так редко Ты радуешь нас новыми творениями.
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С теплом,
Вячеслав Знакомый 26.04.2015 15:56 • Заявить о нарушении
Ох, уж эти "незнакомки"...
Красота и бессловесность...
Души их для вас - потёмки!..
И влечёт вас неизвестность! ;)
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Я тоже 15 лет назад могла бы остаться "прекрасной незнакомкой" в салоне автобуса, если бы мой (на то время будущий) муж не решился заговорить и познакомиться. ;)
Я подумаю над твоим предложением, Слава. Спасибо! :)
С ответным теплом,
Анюта Аксёнова 26.04.2015 16:13 Заявить о нарушении
Красота и бессловесность...
Души их для вас - потёмки!..
И влечёт вас неизвестность! ;)
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Я тоже 15 лет назад могла бы остаться "прекрасной незнакомкой" в салоне автобуса, если бы мой (на то время будущий) муж не решился заговорить и познакомиться. ;)
Я подумаю над твоим предложением, Слава. Спасибо! :)
С ответным теплом,
Анюта Аксёнова 26.04.2015 16:13 Заявить о нарушении
На это произведение написано 10 рецензий, здесь отображается последняя, остальные - в полном списке.