Quick Break Up

Thank you …
Thank you for your laugh;

For your eyes and for your lips;
   For your belly-dancing hips;

For your thoughts and for advice;
   For your jokes that lacked no spice.

For your wisdom based on life,
   For your persevering strife.

For the dreams I had of us:
    For the hope: that not all lost.

For the quick and sharp break up
    before putting your makeup.

That was wise to cut at once
    what could be a great romance.

It could have been or never be.
    “Waste of time,” you said to me.

I had no choice, but to agree.
     Nonetheless, I'll cherish Thee.


Рецензии
Roman!

Your verse is very powerful and excites emotionally.

Удачи!

Ричард Орин   15.07.2013 21:39     Заявить о нарушении
Richard,
Thank you for reading and feeling.
This is the reason I write.

Come again and feel again!

Roman

Роман-Орлов   16.07.2013 04:43   Заявить о нарушении