playing with an eventide gravity

the gravity  of eventide
got even with
my tied emotions
I left agape
the Gate of Light
released endorphin
opiated notions
till all eidola
swashed and canonized
resembled galaxies
on pupils
those spleenful images
quadrupled
the draggled beatitude
in eyes
then teratoid shades
and sneaky winds
crept down the street
through cobbled glades
like cheetahs
and lily-livered leaves
transformed
from meek
to bitter
with mucrones
ready to exscind
the balsamaceous armistice
between
the nictitating space
and stubborn
yet authentic heart
remained in spleen
I shuttered senses
batten down
the Gate
and fled the scene
with particles for stars
to conglobate
and glean
reverberating
time and light
beyond
the gravity
of eventide

November 23, 2012


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Beyond the gravity of eventide,
No man should dare to play,
It's 'danger zone', where particles collide,
Extinguishing each ray.

You're brave, my lad
To even think, you'll manage to escape
Don't toy with this, but if you will,
You've chosen a Russian Roulette..

Симона Пекер   24.11.2012 01:24     Заявить о нарушении
there is no time
decision’s made
I’m out of mind
beyond old fate
your lad
is counting clicks
and bets
no bullets left
for his Roulette…

Glad to see you!!!
Thanks, Симона! :)

Юрий Лазирко   24.11.2012 02:36   Заявить о нарушении
Good to see you too :))!
Intriguing work, as usual!

Симона Пекер   24.11.2012 04:15   Заявить о нарушении